0:00–0:03
Beat 1 · STORY OPEN (hook)
She spins in front of the bedroom mirror IN the black satin slip dress, phone in hand. No greeting — scene with stakes, receipt-number "$140".
0:03–0:07
Beat 2 · Mechanics — posted the look
Flashback: fitting room, she holds the dress with the price tag toward the mirror camera. "I posted the look — guys started chipping in." How it works, one line.
0:07–0:10
Beat 3 · Proof — bar 97→100%PIP 0:07–0:10
PIP screencast: the progress bar ticks 97%→100% with a confetti animation; she's thrilled on the bed. The payoff — proof lands early, voice never stops.
0:10–0:12.5
Beat 4 · TURN — the note (loop closes)
The peak: close-up, she reads the supporter's message in the app chat (screen added in post). The hook's question is answered only now — retention architecture.
0:12.5–0:15
Beat 5 · Reveal + CTAcut 0:12.5↺ LOOP = frame 1
"He was right — post the look." Single cut on the reveal; final frame = the hook frame — rewatches read as intentional. App name only as overlay: "DressIT — link in caption".