Trial: ai-script-generation-skill — "It's Perfect On You"

Core: result-hook with a curiosity gap ("the internet crowdfunded this dress") → budget pain + post the look in one beat → PIP bar 97→100% → the twist: the "it's perfect on you" message lands in the app chat (she reads her phone) → jump-cut reveal in the dress → freeze-frame finale · Friend-to-friend tone · Voice: 36 words / 15s, no music specified — voice carries, PIP bar and chat screen added in post

Timeline (1 column ≈ 1 second · scroll right →)

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"wait… HOW 😭"

"rent said no 💀 → posted it"

"guys chipped in → 100% FUNDED 🎉"

"'it's perfect on you' 🥹"

"wishlist in bio 💌"

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Beat 1 · HOOK: the result first

Close-up selfie: she hugs the black satin dress on a hanger to her chest, excited half-whisper. "The internet crowdfunded this dress for me." (7 words)

0:03–0:07

Beat 2 · Pain + the mechanics

Talking head on the bed, animated "price tag" finger gesture. Budget pain and the fix in one beat: "Way out of budget — so I posted it with the price." (10 words)

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Beat 3 · 100% squealPIP 0:07–0:10

Happy half-squeal, hands to cheeks, disbelief. PIP progress bar 97→100% is added in the edit. "Guys chipped in — a hundred percent in days." (7 words)

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Beat 4 · The message

She reads her phone (screen away from camera — the app chat is composited in the edit), soft touched smile. "Then one message: 'It's perfect on you.'" (6 words)

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Beat 5 · Reveal + freezejump cut 0:12.5

The single cut: she's already IN the dress, a soft wink. "…He was right. Wishlist in bio." (6 words) Freeze-frame on her smile for the final second — the twist IS the ending.

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VO (half-whisper): "The internet crowdfunded this dress for me."

VO: "Way out of budget — so I posted it with the price."

VO: "Guys chipped in — a hundred percent in days."

VO (soft): "Then one message: 'It's perfect on you.'"

VO: "…He was right. Wishlist in bio."

voiceover — friend-to-friend, one continuous story sparse SFX only intentional silence text overlay (added in post)